Hi Askar, On Tue, Aug 26, 2025 at 12:37:17PM +0400, Askar Safin wrote: > ---- On Mon, 25 Aug 2025 23:13:05 +0400 Alejandro Colomar <alx@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote --- > > Should we say "mount point" instead? Otherwise, it's inconsistent with > > d-user@comp:/rbt/man-pages$ grep -E -r -I -i 'mount point' /rbt/man-pages/man | wc -l > 101 > d-user@comp:/rbt/man-pages$ grep -E -r -I -i 'mount-point' /rbt/man-pages/man | wc -l > 9 > d-user@comp:/rbt/man-pages$ grep -E -r -I -i 'mountpoint' /rbt/man-pages/man | wc -l > 4 > > My experiments show that "mount point" is indeed the most popular variant. > > I changed all "mountpoint" to "mount point". > > I decided to keep all "per-mount-point". Thanks! > > > +have its existing per-mount-point flags > > > +cleared and replaced with those in > > > +.I mountflags > > > +when > > > +.B MS_REMOUNT > > > +and > > > +.B MS_BIND > > > +are specified. > > > > Maybe reverse the sentence to start with this? > > I decided simply to remove that "MS_REMOUNT and MS_BIND" part > (because it is already present in previous sentence). Okay. > > > +This means that if > > > > I would move the 'if' to the next line. > > I moved it. But, please, next time do it youself. > I don't plan to become regular man-pages contributor. I do these small things myself if they're the only issue. If there are more important issues, I _also_ point these out, just because it's useful. In general, when writing documentation sentences, write them similarly to how you would write them if they were code. You never put an if at the end of a line of code; never put it at the end of a line of documentation text. > I addressed all complains except for listed above and sent v3. I'll check. Have a lovely day! Alex -- <https://www.alejandro-colomar.es/>
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