Document: draft-ietf-raw-architecture Title: Reliable and Available Wireless Architecture Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned IOTDIR reviewer for this document. I found the document to be easily readable and well-written, modulo a bunch of typos and grammatical nits. A marked up copy with all of my comments/suggestions to fix editorial nits is at: https://1drv.ms/b/c/dc2b364f3f06fea8/EX2CTd0YGM9FkbK2YqL-oyAB56Tn91O4M2eqkq_63OsqNA?e=pmZlen I only had 1 technical comment on the document, which is in the security considerations section. Section 6.2 (Forced Access) only discusses financial cost as a metric that can be attacked. However, I believe that forced access can similarly be used to attack other metrics such as battery life of IOT nodes, or causing congestion on the forced path, thus reducing throughput, etc. I believe these should be similarly called out in that section before publication. Dave -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
