Document: draft-ietf-raw-architecture Title: Reliable and Available Wireless Architecture Reviewer: Brian Haberman Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for this draft. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ I have reviewed this document from an Internet Area perspective. I believe this document is ready for publication as an Informational document with some minor edits. 1. Section 4.2 says "... performing the retries at Layer-3." I believe this should be re-worded a bit to be specific about the retries being done in the forwarding plane. 2. I am curious about the over-emphasis on the OODA Loop concept. The document spends an inordinate amount of time describing that framework and I think it detracts a bit from the goal. 3. Another reviewer raised an issue with Figure 8 and I have to agree with their assessment. The figure itself is a bit complex, but more importantly, the supporting text never refers to the figure. I am not sure the figure is even needed given the explanation provided in section 5.1. 4. I would also recommend considering some additional text in the document that describes the potential conflict between the RAW control loop providing reliability described in this document with control loops residing at the transport layer doing similar functions. How will RAW avoid adversely interacting with actions such as TCP retransmission? -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
