Hi, Michael: -----邮件原件----- 发件人: Michael Richardson [mailto:mcr+ietf@xxxxxxxxxxxx] 发送时间: 2025年6月30日 2:08 收件人: Qin Wu <bill.wu@xxxxxxxxxx>; iot-directorate@xxxxxxxx; anima@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx 主题: Re: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-15 telechat Iotdir review Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Thank you for the review. We'll be working on edits this week and > anticipate getting a new version out before the I-D deadline. I have proposed text for each issue to my co-authors, but your comments would be appreciated. Did I understand your review comments correctly? [Qin Wu] Yes, thanks. > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/233 I am confused here: VAR is in the 1.1 terminology, and is expanded a few times when it is used. What else would you like? [Qin Wu] One example to separate acronym and abbreviation from terminology definition is section 2 and section 3 of RFC9182. I don't want to insist such change on your draft, it is up to you on how to address this. > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/234 https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/240 There are no new DHCP options defined in this document for VoIP :-) There are many existing ones, which if a phone/device was deployed on the enterprise campus, would be used. But, since the device is located elsewhere, configuration of those options is non-trivial. I have reworded the text to make that clearer. [Qin Wu] Good, thanks. > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/235 https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/243 > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/236 https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/242 > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/238 https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/241 > https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/237 https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/239 -- Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@xxxxxxxxxxxx> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
