[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-lisp-geo-13 ietf last call Genart review

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Thanks for your comments Jouni. See responses inline. Draft -14 has been submitted
with changes to reflect your comments.

> On May 12, 2025, at 1:28 PM, Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Minor issues:
> - Section 4.2 lines 243-244 mentions base stations. I do not understand what it
> means in this context. How does a base station in this paragraph relate to a
> WiFi AP?

I was referring to eNodeBs. I have made that more clear.

> Nits/editorial comments:
> - Section 4.2 paragraph starting line 236 discusses about WiFi access-points
> and later in the same paragraph uses the acronym AP (line 243) without first
> defining it. - Section 8 line 408 uses square brackets around where I think
> normal parentheses should be used (ref. "[see Security Considerations
> section]").

Fixed.

Thanks again,
Dino


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