Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo Title: LISP Geo-Coordinates Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-lisp-geo-?? Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review Date: 2025-05-12 IETF LC End Date: 2025-05-07 IESG Telechat date: 2025-06-05 Summary: The document is ready with few editorial nits. Major issues: None Minor issues: - Section 4.2 lines 243-244 mentions base stations. I do not understand what it means in this context. How does a base station in this paragraph relate to a WiFi AP? Nits/editorial comments: - Section 4.2 paragraph starting line 236 discusses about WiFi access-points and later in the same paragraph uses the acronym AP (line 243) without first defining it. - Section 8 line 408 uses square brackets around where I think normal parentheses should be used (ref. "[see Security Considerations section]"). -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
