Re: Draft of Git Rev News edition 123

To: Christian Couder <christian.couder@xxxxxxxxx>, git <git@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: Draft of Git Rev News edition 123
From: Markus Jansen und Julia-Anna Preisler <jansen-preisler@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Mon, 02 Jun 2025 21:00:56 +0200
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Supplied part 2 of tiny corrections and rephrasings with 4ae9989. 
Sorry for being a bit late - feel free to scrutinize as usual.

References:
- Draft of Git Rev News edition 123
  - From: Christian Couder