See below. > On Aug 7, 2025, at 6:15 PM, Dale R. Worley <worley@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > At the least, two things need to be fixed in this I-D: > > - The introduction includes > > This document reserves user ports for experimentation and describes > the use of experiment identifiers to differentiate shared use of > these ports for concurrent experiments. This document also creates a > PExID registry, in addition to the IANA service names and ports > registry [SP-reg], to reduce the potential that experimental uses of > PExIDs that could be tested in the public Internet might interfere > with each other. > > However the first use of "experiment identifiers" is not bound to the > latter use of "PExID". You want to say "the use of experiment > identifiers (PExIDs)". Fixed as per your followup . > - In section 4, there is much discussion of PExIDs but you have to read > the whole section very carefully to find out what they *are*. I > suggest that the section start with a paragraph that explains that: > > A PExID is a 32-bit unsigned integer encoded in network standard byte > order. It is used in an experimental protocol by being prepended to > the protocol's transport data, in front of each separate message or > byte stream. PExIDs MUST be registered in the registry created by > this document. This now basically appears in the intro as per your followup. > > Dale > > -- > last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
