[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis-06 ietf last call Genart review

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Hi Thomas,

Thank you for the review. Please see changes below. 

Joe

On Aug 12, 2025, at 7:34 AM, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis
Title: Certificate Management over CMS (CMC): Transport Protocols
Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis-06
Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review Date: 2025-08-12
IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document is straightforward, concise, and well written.

Major issues:

none

Minor issues:

none

Nits/editorial comments:

# Sections 6.1 and 6.2

The Content-Type header MUST have the appropriate value from Table 2.

Unsure whether the “SMIME Type” parameter is used or if it’s inferred from the
request/response context. I’d say the former, but maybe better avoid any
potential ambiguity.

We added an example to the text. 


# Section 7

The title of this IP Protocol number is "pkix-cmc”.

‘title of this IP Protocol number’ sounds odd.  Perhaps: ‘The Service Name is
“pkix-cmc”.’ as per the associated IANA ports entry [1].

[1]
https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers/service-names-port-numbers.xhtml?search=5318

We agree and made the change. 

# Section 10.1 and 10.2

* Why is IPsec normative?
* Why is BCP195 normative but TLS is only informative?

Thank you, we changed IPsec to informative as it is not required.

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