Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5272bis Title: Certificate Management over CMS (CMC) Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5272bis-08 Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review Date: 2025-09-12 IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-25 IESG Telechat date: 2025-09-18 Summary: The document seems very clear and concise. It is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: None. Minor issues: Section 1 is pretty brief on context, and then Section 2 jumps directly into the specifics of a PKI enrollment. Please consider adding a high-level explanation or reference for what a PKI enrollment is and why it is used. In addition, please consider adding some high-level context on why the specification needed to be revised, or why the newly added features are important. Nits/editorial comments: None. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
