Document: draft-ietf-suit-report Title: Secure Reporting of Update Status Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-suit-report-14 Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review Date: 2025-08-08 IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-11 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The draft is about updating firmware of IoT devices, it defines a logging container which creates a lightweight feedback mechanism for developers in the event that an update or boot fails in the manifest processor. The container is defined in CDDL format. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: Yes. Nits/editorial comments: Sec. 3 includded -> included Sec. 4 decisiosn -> decisions Sec. 4.2 an unusupported COSE COSE undefined As I write this I discovered another typo unusupported -> unsupported Section 9. Media types issue: I think that sections 9.2 - 9.8 can be omitted Sec. 10. I suggest checking Ross' secdir review I think that RFC 9019 is very informative and useful in reading this draft but I could not see a reference to RFC 9019. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
