[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-16 telechat Dnsdir review

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Michael,


On Sun, Jul 27, 2025 at 1:21 PM Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
    >> “This document updates [BRSKI].”
    >>

    > Actually, in the abstract, it can just say "This document updates
    > RFC8995" (no references in the Abstracts are allowed).  Also, normally
    > when an RFC updates a previous RFC, there will be a section which is
    > "Updates to RFC 8995" but I know in this case the updates are
    > clarifications, so it less obvious.  I was going to leave that to the
    > IESG, et al.

I swear I put that exact text into a previous commit, but it's not there.
It's there now in the wicinski-review branch.

I know what you mean here. 

I reviewed your branch and if the other authors are good, I am good.  thanks for the turnaround.


I can create an Updates to RFC 8995 section, but it's just gonna repeat part
of the Introduction.

Agreed - when I reviewed the document the first time I came to the same conclusion. 


tim


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