Document: draft-ietf-netconf-port-numbers
Title: NETCONF Transport Port Numbers
Reviewer: Michael Tüxen
Review result: Ready with Nits
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I have only found the following three nits:
1. The abstract mentions that port number assignments that not stood the
test of time are removed. However, the introduction mentions that also
port number assignments are removed for which the protocols do not
apply (like SSH/UDP).
For consistency, I would list both motivations for assignment removal
in the abstract and introduction.
2. The introduction mentions that
"... many of these assignments are for a transport protocol (i.e., UDP)
for which the requesting application does not apply"
and then the document actually removes one.
Maybe the use of "many" can be improved to be more precise.
3. The introduction mentions that
"... many of the assignments are for protocols that are not deployed
and were tagged as Historic"
and then the document actually removes three.
Maybe the use of "many" can be improved to be more precise.
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