Hi Meral Thank you for your review! I addressed all your issues in version 12 of the draft. I will post the version 12 as soon as the upload portal is open again on the July 19th. Regards Hooman -----Original Message----- From: Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Monday, July 14, 2025 2:55 AM To: gen-art@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; pim@xxxxxxxx Subject: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11 ietf last call Genart review CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional information. Document: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping Title: P2MP Policy Ping Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2025-07-13 IETF LC End Date: 2025-07-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Asbtract: SR Point-to-Multipoint (P2MP) -suggestion->Segment Routing Point-to-Multipoint (SR P2MP) "via YANG modles"-->"via YANG models" HB> Thank you, updated. 3.1.1. "Applicablitiry"-->"Applicability" HB> thank you! Updated. 4. "Fu, thermore,"-->"Furthermore, " HB> thank you, updated. 8. draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy latest is dated July 2025 not Oct 2019 HB> thank you updated. -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
