Hi Giuseppe, Thank you very much for your review and insightful comments on the draft. These are good suggestions. I kept 4.1 standalone (now as 4) since it is specifically related to Sender requirements, while section 5 covers PHB requirements, but I moved the other 4.x subsections to section 6, relabeled it as Operational Considerations and tweaked the opening text of that section accordingly. I think this does improve the readability for operators. Attached is a WIP draft 30 with this new structure. -Greg On 6/17/25, 10:23 AM, "Giuseppe Fioccola via Datatracker" <noreply@xxxxxxxx <mailto:noreply@xxxxxxxx>> wrote: Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-nqb Title: A Non-Queue-Building Per-Hop Behavior (NQB PHB) for Differentiated Services Reviewer: Giuseppe Fioccola Review result: Has Nits This document specifies a Non-Queue-Building Per-Hop Behavior (NQB PHB) in order to provide a separate queue for application-limited traffic microflows, allowing to avoid the queuing delays and losses caused by other traffic. This document has been developed primarily for access network segments and recommends a specific DSCP to identify NQB microflows. It also updates RFC 8325. From an OPSDIR point of view, it is good to have Section 4, 6 and 7. Even if the information is spread among these different sections, they provide guidance for networks that forward traffic marked with the NQB DSCP and for networks that do not currently support the NQB PHB. I think that the document has a clear scope and is almost ready for publication, but I have a couple of suggestions: - I think that section 5 on NQB PHB Requirements could be moved before section 4. Also, since section 4.1 explains NQB Sender Requirements, it can be placed under section 5. - To improve structure and clarity, you can probably consider to merge section 4 and section 6 since some information is shared such as the configuration recommendations. A whole section on the Operational and Management aspects as result of the merge would work better in my opinion.
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