Hello Vidhi,
Thanks for the review of PQC for Engineers draft.
The Nits have been addressed in the
https://github.com/tireddy2/pqc-for-engineers/pull/91 and the updated draft will be published after addressing comments from other reviews of the Last Call.
Regards,
Aritra.
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Document: draft-ietf-pquip-pqc-engineers
Title: Post-Quantum Cryptography for Engineers
Reviewer: Vidhi Goel
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Nits:
Section 2.1:
"However, quantum operations are fundamentally different from classical ones,
whereas 2^{64} classical operations can be efficiently parallelized, 2^{64}
quantum operations must be performed serially, making them infeasible on
practical quantum computers" This sentence could be reworded without the use of
`whereas`, it was a bit confusing for me to read at first.
Section 6.1:
"Key Encapsulation mechanism based on the hardness on learning with errors in
algebraically unstructured lattices." Did you mean based on the hardness of?
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