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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-nqb
Title: A Non-Queue-Building Per-Hop Behavior (NQB PHB) for Differentiated
Services Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-nqb-29
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2025-06-23
IETF LC End Date: 2025-06-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track document.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 2

Nits:
- Abstract: s/applications to cable broadband/the application of NQ PHB to
cable broadband/

- S3.3, first paragraph: Is L4S "experimental"?  Or is it "Informational"?  The
designation of L4S (RFC 9330) is "Informational", but the draft uses the
"experimental" prefix.  I suspect the draft means "experimental" in a generic
sense, and not as a RFC designation moniker, but just the same, it confused me
(and may do so to others who are aware of IETF RFC designations).


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