[Last-Call] draft-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update-20 telechat Dnsdir review

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Document: draft-ietf-6man-rfc6724-update
Title: Prioritizing known-local IPv6 ULAs through address selection policy
Reviewer: Jim Reid
Review result: Ready with Nits

I'm the dnsdir reviewer for this I-D.

The draft has no significant DNS content: ie nothing that raises operational or
protocol concerns for the DNS. From that perspective, the I-D is ready.

Overall, the I-D is clear and well written. There are a couple of nits though:

1) "Behaviors" is a non-word that annoys me. There is no reason to pluralise
behaviour (or even behavior).

2) The sentence beginning "Receiving a DNS response for a ULA destination..."
in Section 8 is clumsy and should be restructured.


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