Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-lan-pd
Title: IPv6 CE Routers LAN Prefix Delegation
Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Ready with Nits
Hi!
Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cpe-lan-pd
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
This is a simple document that defines “requirements” for IPv6 CE routers to
support DHCPv6 PD for distributing unused prefixes that were delegated to a
IPv6 CE router.
It looks straightforward and complete, with this review highlighting only some
minor issues and nits.
First, I find it interesting that lots of 2119 language is present in an
Informational document. I imagine that is following rfc7084.
Second, on the terminology section:
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3. Terminology
The following terminology is defined for this document.
* IPv6 node: a device that implements IPv6
* IPv6 router: a node that forwards IPv6 packets not explicitly
addressed to itself.
* IPv6 host: Any IPv6 node that is not a router.
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All these terms are already defined e.g., in rfc6434. This document makes it
sound as if it is defining them for a first time here, please update this
including the normative citation for the definition.
I hope these are useful and clear.
Thanks again!
Carlos.
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