Nicolai Leymann via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> writes: > Review result: Ready Thank you for the review Ricolai! > - Brief description in Table captions might be helpful; e.g. "Table 1: DNSSEC > algorithms registries" - Section 2: That's a good suggestion, I'll add some thank you. > ○ "New entries add through the…" -> " > "New entries added through the…" Fixed, thanks! > - Section 8: > ○ I am not a native speaker but to me the use of the "serial comma" looks a > bit unusual and - according to wikipedia" - is optional and only used when > "writing out three or more terms": > "by Paul Wouters, and Ondrej Sury." -> > "by Paul Wouters and Ondrej Sury." Fixed, thanks! > - A.1. - A.8. > ○ Use of a full stop at end of bullet point is not consistent. > - A.4. > ○ "based on discussions no the dnsop mailing list" -> > "based on discussions on the dnsop mailing list" > > Regards > > Nic > > -- Wes Hardaker USC/ISI -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
