Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Review result: Ready Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Review Result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The document is dense and not knowning the subject matter in depth took a bit of time. I do have some minor quibbles, from a terminology perspective. ## Section 2 s/This document makes use of the following term/This document makes use of the following terms/ ## 3.3.1. Customer Site s/Customer Site/Customer Site (CS)/ 3.3.1. Customer Site s/Customer Site/Customer Site (CS)/ ## 5.1.2. TN QoS Layer s/TN/Transport Network (TN)/ ## Provider Network there are acronyms for many different facets, but not for "Provider Network" ? ## Acronyms I ended up generating a version of the draft which had links to the acronyms and that made it easier to get into. Perhaps some suggestions for the RFC Editor? -- last-call mailing list -- last-call@xxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to last-call-leave@xxxxxxxx
