kristofferhaugsbakk@xxxxxxxxxxxx writes: > From: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > > • Replace with phrases that are more standard (“all-or-nothing” > instead of “-none”) > • Add coordinating words that make it less likely for you to trip > over the sentence (“*that* "gc" can do”) > • Use “SMTP” instead of both SMTP and smtp > • Don’t mention `git fsck --reference` since the previous release > was not affected by this minor bug. Also say “errored out” since > the git-refs(1) bug was there in v2.48.0 as well > • Use the more widespread “linked” instead of “secondary worktree” > > Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > --- > Documentation/RelNotes/2.50.0.adoc | 17 ++++++++--------- > 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) Thanks. > > diff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.50.0.adoc b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.50.0.adoc > index 99acf814875..2a1463644b4 100644 > --- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.50.0.adoc > +++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.50.0.adoc > @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features > * Auth-related (and unrelated) error handling in send-email has been > made more robust. > > - * Updating multiple references have only been possible in all-or-none > + * Updating multiple references have only been possible in an all-or-nothing > fashion with transactions, but it can be more efficient to batch > multiple updates even when some of them are allowed to fail in a > best-effort manner. A new "best effort batches of updates" mode > @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features > > * The build procedure installs bash (but not zsh) completion script. > > - * send-email has been updated to work better with Outlook's smtp server. > + * send-email has been updated to work better with Outlook's SMTP server. > > * "git diff --minimal" used to give non-minimal output when its > optimization kicked in, which has been disabled. > @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features > delta chains from forming in a corner case even when there is no > such cycle. > > - * Make repository clean-up tasks "gc" can do available to "git > + * Make repository clean-up tasks that "gc" can do available to "git > maintenance" front-end. > > * Bundle-URI feature did not use refs recorded in the bundle other > @@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc. > been dropped. > > * The code path to access the "packed-refs" file while "fsck" is > - taught to mmap the file, instead of reading the whole file in the > + taught to mmap the file, instead of reading the whole file into > memory. > > * Assorted fixes for issues found with CodeQL. > @@ -391,14 +391,13 @@ Fixes since v2.49 > reverse failed to give the mode bits of the path "removed" by the > patch to the file it creates, which has been corrected. > > - * "git verify-refs" (and hence "git fsck --reference") started > - erroring out in a repository in which secondary worktrees were > - prepared with Git 2.43 or lower. > + * "git verify-refs" errored out in a repository in which > + linked worktrees were prepared with Git 2.43 or lower. > (merge d5b3c38b8a sj/ref-contents-check-fix later to maint). > > - * Update total_ram() functrion on BSD variants. > + * Update total_ram() function on BSD variants. > > - * Update online_cpus() functrion on BSD variants. > + * Update online_cpus() function on BSD variants. > > * Other code cleanup, docfix, build fix, etc. > (merge 227c4f33a0 ja/doc-block-delimiter-markup-fix later to maint). > > base-commit: 4c0e625c091d4c648cec7319bafaed3cc81658e5
